....drawing chubby mermaids and trying to get a pose right whiles listening to the new Wu-Tang album as well as the soundtracks for the Godfather movies. I'll have one illustration done by the end of tonight. Here's the rough

I've found that decreasing my sugar intake had substantially increased my concentration span. I can actually get stuff done with out being distracted.
Sugar, or my large intake of sugar appears to be my achilles heel. Of all things in the world, bloody sugar.
Shiiiit.
Well, better to find out now than later, eh?
I've found that decreasing my sugar intake had substantially increased my concentration span. I can actually get stuff done with out being distracted.
Sugar, or my large intake of sugar appears to be my achilles heel. Of all things in the world, bloody sugar.
Shiiiit.
Well, better to find out now than later, eh?
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Date: 2007-12-14 04:16 am (UTC)From:I think there are bits here where she loses her femininity to more masculine features. The penciled version has more masculine shoulders but you've corrected that in the inked version.
I think the head is a bit small, overall. With the foreshortening, her breasts are gonna be bigger than her head. Which is not totally unlikely, but it seems that in this case, her head is too small for her body.
Finally, I think you would do well to add as much detail to the hair as you have the excellently rendered body shading.
And I really do like this composition.
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